Sunday, November 9, 2008

The Drifter Teaser

Luka had set the gun back into his holster, there wasn't any movement from the other side of the door. He stared through the little holes in the wood where the bullets went through. You're dead now, creep. He thought as his hand turned the doorknob.
All of this could have been avoided, had he just turned himself in and released the young lady he had hostage. Luka didn't take kindly to pyschopaths, unless that pyscho was himself. He stepped back and kicked the door in, the wood giving way under his boot before he stared into the room. Blood was on the ground but there was a lack of assurance inside of Luka's mind. Blood, but no body. It meant he had at least nicked the guy, but where was he now. His hands reached to his side and removed his gun again. There wasn't any other trail of blood anywhere near, just the pool of it in the middle of the room. His eyes scanned the unfamiliar bedroom. Windows were closed, closet door was open and there was nowhere to hide in such a tiny place. Foolishly he looked above him, as if the assailant was stuck on the roof. There wasnt anyone hanging from the ceiling as if he was a spiderman. The matress had been laid flat on the floor so there wasn't any chance of the guy hiding underneath the bed......

2 comments:

Anonymous said...

sounds good! i thought u were gonna use surin.. but thats ok. if you want, you can change it. i'm not that comfortable with luka but meh. thats fine xD Good job toniepoo!!

Tone said...

Hmm its a rl story.. not a ffxi... no gamenames allowed!